Every month the awesome people at Grey Matter Press sponsor a flash fiction writing contest. I'm happy to report that this month I am one of two grand prize winners! (The first ever tie in Flash Masters history.) You can read my winning entry here. I can't wait to get my signed copy of John F. D. Taff's The End in All Beginnings.
I'm the sort of person who loves DVD extras; in that spirit, I wanted to talk a little about my process in writing my entry.
Last month's contest was for a 100 word story. I have some experience writing 100 word drabbles. In addition to the Trashling Tales, I've had 100 word stories published in The Drabbler, Necrotic Tissue and elsewhere. But for the third contest, the word limit was raised to 200 words.
Writing a 200 word story is a lot different than writing a 100 word story. (If you don't believe me, try it.) Because I'm more comfortable with the 100 word story, I thought, "Hey, I should try to write two drabbles that depict the same event from two different perspectives."
Thus my story "He Said/She Said" was born.
Another fun feature of the monthly contests is that one must include a set of words in the story. This month the words were: Death, Pearl, Stairs, Hate and Organ. I thought it would be fun to use each of the words in both halves of the story, so I did. E.g., in one section pearl is the gem, in the other, it's a woman's name.
"He Said/She Said" is an example of haiku fiction in that you really need both halves of the story to get the complete picture as to what's going on. I'm happy that the story seems to have resonated with the judges. I certainly had a lot of fun writing it.
I take my victory to mean that there's something to this haiku fiction thing...
Do you want to be a writer, but you don't have time to write?
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Haiku Fiction. Small stories with big impact.
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August 30, 2014
August 28, 2014
Ariela the Cloud-Dancer (A Trashling Tale)
She stands
atop Mount Washdry and gazes at the shrouded moon.
Dark bands trap its silver light.
She undoes
her hair and sways skyclad to the song that sounds within her soul. Wrists and ankles
move, knees and elbows. She closes her eyes as the dance overtakes her
completely.
Limbs
whirl. Wordlessly, she keens her song. Slow, fast, loud, soft. Her dance flows
gracefully and without effort as the wind.
When she is
finished, she opens her eyes. The moon shines pure blessings on all Fill.
Does she
know whether or not her dance moves the clouds? Does she care?
August 21, 2014
Quicknib the Scribe (A Trashling Tale)
When I was
young, a distant glimpse of the Makers set me on my path.
To find the
Scribes is sufficient call to our way of life. I spent years as an apprentice
Paper-Reclaimer, slowly working my way up to Ink-Confector, then Pensmith.
Invested at last in my sacred robes as Scribe, I labored a month on my first
composition.
Master
Truehand led me to the very top of Mount
Cheforiac and took my
work from me. I wept as he let the paper go.
We cast our
tales to the winds, O Makers, hoping that you will notice us.
August 14, 2014
Giatolo the Sell-Sword (A Trashling Tale)
Cardboard
crunched. Giatolo drew his twin blades and kissed bone charms made by Tu-va-illa
herself.
Green eyes
glowed in the shadows—the beast killing the Mouse-Herders' flock. A grey tomcat
launched itself at Giatolo. Teeth snapped so close that he felt its hot breath.
His blades flashed. The cat snarled and batted him to the dust.
The
grinning beast grabbed him by his mouseskin vest and tossed him into the air.
The sell-sword laughed, somersaulting and landing on the cat's back.
His blades
sang until the tomcat ran off howling. Giatolo chuckled and gathered severed
whiskers to re-string his lute.
August 08, 2014
A Human Echoes Top Ten
Today marks the release of the hundredth episode of the
Human Echoes Podcast. For a hundred weeks straight, Tony Southcotte and AlbertBerg have reviewed horror films and weird fiction while talking about
everything from AJ and Bodybuilding Ninjas to Yarn-bombing and Zombies.
I came to the podcast late, around Episode 60, thanks to an
announcement for one of their flash fiction contests at Horror Tree. With the
old writer's saying in mind, "Know your audience," I listened to an
episode or two.
I got hooked.
There's something purely delightful about the back-and-forth between the two hosts, and I've been introduced to a world of movies and books that I wouldn't know without the podcast. Listen to HEP and you start to feel like you're a good friend of people you've never met. (For the record, and in interests of full disclosure, I also won that contest...)
I got hooked.
There's something purely delightful about the back-and-forth between the two hosts, and I've been introduced to a world of movies and books that I wouldn't know without the podcast. Listen to HEP and you start to feel like you're a good friend of people you've never met. (For the record, and in interests of full disclosure, I also won that contest...)
Human Echoes has really become more than just a podcast.
There's The Writers Arena they founded, where two writers duke it out via a weekly short story contest. But even more, there's a whole community of fans who
regularly talk via social media. I wouldn't have been able to compile the
following top ten list without their help.
A special thanks to the incredible Jon Jones, who nominated most of the episodes. I also want to give a shout-out to everyone who responded to my Twitter call for nominations and the ensuing conversation: Rich Alix, Danny Brophy, Joseph Devon, Ellie Ann, Jen, Caleb Newell and Hannah-Elizabeth Thompson. My apologies if I missed anyone.
A special thanks to the incredible Jon Jones, who nominated most of the episodes. I also want to give a shout-out to everyone who responded to my Twitter call for nominations and the ensuing conversation: Rich Alix, Danny Brophy, Joseph Devon, Ellie Ann, Jen, Caleb Newell and Hannah-Elizabeth Thompson. My apologies if I missed anyone.
And of course thanks to Tony and Al for making it all possible.
The ranking is all my own doing. If you disagree on the episodes and their ranking or want to suggest
other episodes, please comment or let me know.
10) Episode 83, with Hannah-Elizabeth
This episode is a rare one without Tony, but features the
HEP superfan, Hannah-Elizabeth. It introduced me to the awesome Timmy Failure, but even more it highlights the fan community the podcast has created.
9) Episode 89, Review of Maximum Overdrive
Nobody is better at creating a great review of a bad movie
than Tony and Al. This is an excellent case in point, Stephen King's directorial debut.
8) Episode 43, Review of Rubber
And then there are hidden gems that I at least wouldn't know
about if it weren't for the guys. From the teaser on the HEP webpage: "In this episode Tony and Al take a ride with Rubber, a movie about a cold-hearted serial killer named Robert who goes around exploding people’s heads with his psychokinetic powers; also he is a tire."
A movie about a homicidal tire. And it works!
A movie about a homicidal tire. And it works!
7) Episode 35: Review of The Orphanage
Another great movie that I wouldn't know about without Tony and Al. A haunting movie about ghosts that are scary without being (Mike Myers pinky raise) evil...
Another great movie that I wouldn't know about without Tony and Al. A haunting movie about ghosts that are scary without being (Mike Myers pinky raise) evil...
6) Episode 32, First interview with Joseph Devon
There are a lot of interviews on this list. I think because,
as I've already mentioned, the guys are all about community. About creating a
place where creative people are appreciated. This interview with the author of Probability Angels is the first case
in point.
Plus you get all the DEV-un versus de-VONN fun.
5) Episode 44, Interview with Ellie Ann
Speaking of great interviews with great authors, you can't miss the interview with the queen of trans-media, Ellie Ann. It's about her novel The Silver Sickle, and so much more.
4) Episode 68, Review of Krampus the Yule Lord
This is probably my favorite review episode. And what's not
to like about Krampus? (He may come to get you if you don't like this episode.)
3) Episode 64, Interview with Eric Luke
The guys reviewed the author-read audio novel Interference in Episode 61,
and the review was great. A free audio book about a Lovecraftian horror
entering the world through audiobooks? Metafiction and horror. What's not to
like?
And then came the interview, and Mr. Luke is so gracious and
charming. It's a pure delight to hear him talk about his craft. If you haven't
heard the interview, go check it out. Now.
2) Episode 81, Second interview with Bill Oberst Jr.
The guys have interviewed the actor Bill Oberst Jr. twice.
Best known for his work in horror films, Mr. Oberst is the hardest working man
in Hollywood .
Seriously. Check out his IMDB page.
The guys talk with Mr. Oberst about his work on the movie
Children of Sorrow. And then he talks about why he chooses the sorts of roles
he does. Awesome. Just awesome. As a person of faith who writes horror, I find
this episode so inspiring. I've listened to it at least four times and keep it
permanently on my ipod.
1) Episode 100
I know, I know. It's weird to put this here, especially
since I haven't heard the episode. But I have it on very good authority that
the episode is awesome. I plan on listening to it at least twice this weekend.
But I also put Episode 100 here to make a point. The Human
Echoes Podcast keeps getting better and better. So mathematically, Episode 100
must be at least a hundred times better than Episode 1, right?
More seriously, I know that with Tony and Al, the best is always yet to come. I hope that this list inspires them to keep doing what they do, because they sure inspire us.
More seriously, I know that with Tony and Al, the best is always yet to come. I hope that this list inspires them to keep doing what they do, because they sure inspire us.
August 07, 2014
Free example of Haiku Fiction!
I found with my surprise and delight today that A. A. Attanasio's short novel Killing with the Edge of the Moon is currently available free for Kindle.
If you want an example of what I mean by haiku fiction, read this book. It's an awesome story spanning two worlds while focusing on the experiences of two characters.
A moving story. I highly recommend it.
If you want an example of what I mean by haiku fiction, read this book. It's an awesome story spanning two worlds while focusing on the experiences of two characters.
A moving story. I highly recommend it.
Kranok the Searcher (A Trashling Tale)
The
pathways of the Land
of Fill shift from night
to night, month to month, year to year. Only the Makers know why.
Kranok
stands at a crossroad. He raises his Searcher's staff to divine his next step.
If he goes
left, he will reach the habitations of artists and artisans, Tinkers and
Coggers. If he goes right, the fields of Farmers and pens of Mouse-Herders.
Straight ahead lie the camps of the Makers' Children, next to the furnaces of
Those-Who-Burn.
He opens
closed eyes and sets off over the refuse itself. He walks somewhere he has
never been before.
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